Thread:Croquedead/@comment-197.9.121.132-20160817115709/@comment-5052946-20160817214304

I saw your page. For a first page, it's pretty good! I changed a few minor mistakes, most of them are capital letters which you seem to forget often. Also, you don't have to put a space before the comma and the dot, only after. :)

Other than that, keep up the good work!