Talk:Viability Ranking/@comment-36321685-20180806181034/@comment-2001:4D80:0:60:802:200:0:104A-20180807223624

Although we appreciate your enthusiasm and devotion to Monster Legends why did you feel the need to edit the pages for Alpha Cliviast, Ouros and Igneus? I thought the information was already well thought out. However, if you do feel the need to make edits may I suggest that you make minor changes and to please seriously consider using spell-check and grammar check tools. Otherwise it makes your work look sloppy and unprofessional. Possessor is spelled using four S's.

I also find the way you write very disturbing. I know that this is not a college level English course, but the way you write sounds too casual as if you are dumbing down the English for the audience or talking to a 10 year old.

One more thing. You did not mention that Ouros is an earth element monster but you did remember to include what elements Alpha Cliviast and Igneus are. Consistency is key. If you are going to talk about elements for each monster then be sure to include that information for all monsters.

If you want you should consider editing the pages of lower ranked monsters for practice. Once you are "good enough" then you can edit the pages of high ranked monsters.

Thank you again for your enthusiasm and devotion to Monster Legends.