Talk:Makugan/@comment-34389465-20190115222705

This is a good article, but please check the points below.

First, I thought it was made a rule to not do the official descriptions for monster articles... even if it’s not the real official one, no one cares about it’s backstory. You need to say, in the first introduction paragraph, if it’s a good or bad monster, without yet explaining why. Go check the Advice article if you need help.

Secondly, there are a few things in the Pros section who don’t belong there. I don’t see how “3 PER moves” and “AOE Bleed” are actually good things for a monster...

And there are a few things you should add in the Cons section, like “Lacks Control moves” (important point) and “No Special damaging moves” (as she will be weak against all metal monsters)e

Otherwise, good job for this one. Keep going.

Bye 👋